Monday, April 11, 2011

Free writing

There once lived a magical person who could move mountains and palaces. He lived a very gentle life becasue he moved the armies that wanted to fight away from each other.One day the two magesties finally gave in and decided to go and attack this magical wizard. This wizard saw the meetign and knew that he had to make his defences know or he would be in trouble.
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4 comments:

  1. DevinApril 12, 2011 at 5:36 AM

    Packers own, bears suck but the free writing story is good.

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  2. JasonApril 12, 2011 at 5:39 AM

    Good story. It was very creative. You should add on to it when you have some more free time.

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  3. John S.April 12, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    I think you could have developed the extent of the wizard's magical powers more.

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  4. BradyApril 12, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    Good start but you should put an ending on it so its comolete

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